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task #16348: Review new Chinese translation of GNU FDL
Submitter: | Wensheng XIE <wxie> | ||
Submitted: | Sat 04 Mar 2023 12:50:50 PM UTC | ||
Category: | None | Should Start On: | Fri 03 Mar 2023 04:00:00 PM UTC |
Should be Finished on: | Thu 18 May 2023 04:00:00 PM UTC | Priority: | 5 - Normal |
Status: | Done | Privacy: | Public |
Assigned to: | None | Percent Complete: | 100% |
Open/Closed: | Closed | Effort: | 10.00 |
Mon 17 Jul 2023 11:26:42 PM UTC, comment #4: |
Wensheng XIE <wxie> |
Wed 26 Apr 2023 01:12:26 PM UTC, comment #3: Thank you, hagb.
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Wensheng XIE <wxie> |
Wed 19 Apr 2023 06:14:45 PM UTC, comment #2: Hi, wxie:
此处“实效”在中文中为名词,似乎改成一个形容词(如“有效”)会更通顺?
我认为此处的意思作品赋予(用户)自由而非作品本身拥有自由(之后一处谈及作品的自由的地方有 "providing the same freedoms" 的表述),或者使用成类似“作品必须是同等自由的”的译文就可以避开对原文“be free”的诠释同时保留原义。
(同上一条)此处 “providing the same freedoms” 建议翻译为“提供同样的自由”(或类似含义)。此外,“principally” 可能是修饰后面的 “for” 而非前面的“recommend”。
中文“出版商”的原义似乎是比“将文档分发至公众的任何个人或实体”要窄。虽然在这里对“出版商”一词重新做了定义,但还是建议使用更接近“将本文档分发至公众的任何个人或实体”含义的词(比如“发行者”?不过感觉也不是太符合这意思),以减小不细心的读者产生误解的概率。
此处(以及此文其它地方涉及这四种章节的标题的表述)是否需要给出“鸣谢”、“致献”、“背书”或“历史”的英文原文?许可证中的“translates XYZ in another language”是针对从英语为原语言翻译到其他语言而说的,如果我没有理解错的话,符合许可证定义的中文文档的历史章节标题应该是“历史(History)”这样子,译文中是否需要体现出要求使用的“History”是英文原文(而是中文的“历史”)这一点?
此处的“reference”是否是“引用”的意思?(https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/reference 6.The act of referring: a submitting for information or decision.)
加粗处译文是否和原意似乎有出入。原文“accept ... in exchange for copies”表达的意思应该是相当于对一次分发“要求补偿”,而我的理解中“接受补偿”也可以指代一些自愿的补偿(如打赏/捐款)而非是被要求的补偿。
“另类”在中文中似乎主要表示“与众不同、特殊”的含义。(现代汉语词典第七版也只有此释义)
此处“例如……”可能会被混淆为对“其他内容”的举例。删去“而不包含其他内容”或许可以解决这个问题,而前面“只包含”已经蕴含了“不包含其他内容”。
“另加之”可能会引起歧义:“之”被理解为指代“该封面文字”,而“另加之”理解为“重复添加该封面文字”。
此处“其名称”的“其”是否可能会引起歧义,让人理解为“其”指代“文档”?或许可以修改为“他们的名称”或者“他们的名字”?
此处“sublicense”应为“再许可”之义。(https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sublicense)
此处多了一个“其”。
中文“公司”似乎一般指企业。此处“corporation”建议使用“组织”,这也与“Creative Commons Corporation”的译文一致。
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郭俊余 <hagb> |
Sat 04 Mar 2023 01:22:30 PM UTC, comment #1: Hello, wxie:
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郭俊余 <hagb> |
Sat 04 Mar 2023 12:50:50 PM UTC, original submission:
Hi, hagb:
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Wensheng XIE <wxie> |
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Thank you, Hagb.
As per email communication with the author/translator, the review is implemented in the translation of GNU FDL.
The job is done.
wxie