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bug #35008: philosophy/practical.de.html

Submitted by:  None
Submitted on:  Thu 08 Dec 2011 12:19:58 AM UTC  
 
Category: NoneSeverity: 3 - normal
Item Group: NoneStatus: behoben
Privacy: öffentlichAssigned to: Joerg Kohne <joeko>
Open/Closed: Closed

Thu 08 Dec 2011 12:19:58 AM UTC, original submission:

> In the first sentence it should be read "von Freier Software" instead of
> "von Freie Software"
>
> The second sentence should begin with "Das" instead of "Es". Your
> translation seems to translate word by word.
>
> In the next sentence you shouldn't translate "denies" to "verleugnet".
> In this context the meaning in German is "verweigert" and should be
> translated into "nimmt". "Unfreie Software ist schlecht, weil sie Ihren
> Ihre Freiheit nimmt." This is proper German.
>
> The next sentence (in your translation) is hard to read. Again: it is
> translated word by word. "zu Fragen" is always wrong. It should read "zu
> fragen". My proposal for this sentence: "Nach den praktischen Vorteilen
> von freier Software zu fragen, gleicht der Frage nach den praktischen
> Vorteilen, nicht mit Handschellen gefesselt zu sein."
>
> In the next sentence you should use "gibt" instead of "hat" and drop
> "auch". I suggest this translation: "Ja, es gibt Vorteile:"
>
> In the senctence after the list the second "Sie" should be replaced with
> "sich". It would seem like a better German if you replace "um Sie davon
> zu überzeugen" with "um zur Überzeugung zu gelangen".
>
> The next sentence should be reworded: "Wahrscheinlich nicht -- denn Sie
> verstehen, dass es Ihre Freiheit auf dem Spiel steht."
>
> My proposal for the last sentence: "Sobald Sie erkennen, dass mit
> unfreier Software Ihre Freiheit auf dem Spiel steht, werden Sie nicht
> mehr fragen, welche praktischen Vorteile Freie Software hat."


Danke, Max

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      Summaryphilosophy/practical=>philosophy/practical.de.html
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