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task #15738: Update/Translation of philosophy/bdk.html

Submitter:  Wensheng XIE <wxie>
Submitted:  Fri 31 Jul 2020 01:25:25 PM UTC
   
 
Category:  None Should Start On:  Thu 30 Jul 2020 04:00:00 PM UTC
Should be Finished on:  Sat 29 Aug 2020 04:00:00 PM UTC Priority:  5 - Normal
Status:  Done Privacy:  Public
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Open/Closed:  Closed Effort:  10.00

Wed 26 Aug 2020 12:48:17 PM UTC, comment #3: 

Hi, hagb:

感谢审阅。你的建议很中肯。
我参照意见做了修改。文章已经重新提交。

祝好
wxie

Wensheng XIE <wxie>
Group administrator
Tue 25 Aug 2020 03:23:27 PM UTC, comment #2: 

Hi, wxie:

== 1 ==

> then said the movie barons and the proud high-lords of song,
> 然后,电影 骑士 和歌曲主宰高傲地说,


此处“barons”译作“骑士”我认为不妥。
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%AA%91%E5%A3%AB

> 在骑士文学中,骑士往往是勇敢、忠诚的象征,并以骑士精神作为行事守则,是英雄的化身。


而此处大概应该表现出他们在电影领域强大的势力,比如用“贵族”、“大王”一类的词?

== 2 ==

> Then up rose Dennis's merry men, they gathered to his cause:
> 然后会有 随从们 为 Dennis<sup><a href=\"#TransNote1\">1</a></sup> 而来:


“merry men”(后文也出现了几次)好像是有一种绿林好汉的意味在里面(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Merry_Men)?
译成“好汉们”或者“伙伴们”会不会更合适点。

== 3 ==

> all for the Constitution, or the lords of copyright will steal away our books and music in their haughty might.&rdquo;
> 为了宪法,不然版权之神就会强力掠走我们的书籍和音乐。&rdquo;


此处“the lords of copyright”译成“版权之神”感觉容易让人误解为某种神圣的象征而不是那些版权流氓?

== 4 ==

> &ldquo;Alas for us, my merry men! the Congress is beguiled,
> &ldquo;嘿呦,我的随从们啊!国会只是 在冒充


我认为此处应该是指国会被蒙骗了。译成“受蒙蔽”,顺带和下面一句押韵如何?(不过这样前面“只是”也要想另外一个词)

== 5 ==

> that the evil that the song-lords plan might somehow be undone.
> 歌神 计划的罪恶可能无法得逞。


类似于 3


祝好
Hagb

郭俊余 <hagb>
Group Member
Tue 25 Aug 2020 12:58:20 PM UTC, comment #1: 

Translation and review is done.
File is committed into www and www-zh-cn.

This is ballad (song), so the Chinese translation may need more review.

@hagb
Can you help review?

Wensheng XIE <wxie>
Group administrator
Fri 31 Jul 2020 01:25:25 PM UTC, original submission:  
Wensheng XIE <wxie>
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