- abstract rework to straighten our strongest points - rethink the interop related tries, omit if they're useless (the zope&ohp stuff and whetever we might want try touch) - layout: uml into figures at least (I kludged this for thesis) - image of xupdf, hopefully discussion - summarize the important open issues - rework the use cases so that they make the article better, or at least finish how they currently are