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46  Introduction  Introduction
47  ============  ============
48    
49  [tjl] XXX: the idea that the global graph can be constructed  ..  
50  using semantic interoperability is not apparent here! *NEEDS*  
51  to be. Otherwise, referee: "Yes, great, but what does it have      [tjl] XXX: the idea that the global graph can be constructed
52  to do with SemWeb?"      using semantic interoperability is not apparent here! *NEEDS*
53        to be. Otherwise, referee: "Yes, great, but what does it have
54        to do with SemWeb?"
55    
56        The intro should say
57            1) what is this
58            2) why present it at semweb conference
59    
60        It feels much too long now, and doesn't cover point 2) at all.
61    
62        Also, benja was saying we want to talk more generally
63        about how to connect the apps - then should
64        have less mention of fenfire.
65    
66  Assume that a user needs to coordinate the activities of her  Assume that a user needs to coordinate the activities of her
67  workgroup. She has at her disposal applications for email,  workgroup. She has at her disposal applications for email,

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