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create a new RDF node that has connections to both papers and gives |
create a new RDF node that has connections to both papers and gives |
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the perspective under which they support / contradict each other. |
the perspective under which they support / contradict each other. |
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In sum, the papers seems to have some interesting ideas floating around. |
In sum, the papers seems to have some interesting ideas floating around. |
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Final 2 paragraphs of section 2 - you claim that paper isn't useful to |
Final 2 paragraphs of section 2 - you claim that paper isn't useful to |
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Bogus. You need to be able to make interconnections at all, and just |
Bogus. You need to be able to make interconnections at all, and just |
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as many as you need; more isn't better. |
as many as you need; more isn't better. |
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Convince me that |
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you have thought this through rather than reciting Nelson's view. Have a |
you have thought this through rather than reciting Nelson's view. |
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I got nothing of this from Ted, so that should be easy ;-) |
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look at the network diagrams from the early Intermedia papers on the |
look at the network diagrams from the early Intermedia papers on the |
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Victorian web. |
Victorian web. |
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Ok, not "the more interconnections" but the *right* amount. |
Ok, not "the more interconnections" but the *right* amount. |
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I.e. contrasting the spatial structures of |
I.e. contrasting the spatial structures of |
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paper vs hyperbolic paper vs graph. |
paper vs hyperbolic paper vs graph. |
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Section 3.1: an illustration of the zzStructure might be useful, |
Section 3.1: an illustration of the zzStructure might be useful, |
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especially if it could be compared with an RDF structure in 3.2 |
especially if it could be compared with an RDF structure in 3.2 |
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Section 3.2: zzStructure is simpler to browse locally because it has |
Section 3.2: zzStructure is simpler to browse locally because it has |
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higher-level (user-centred) semantics. |
higher-level (user-centred) semantics. |
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Section 3.2: How does the many-many relationship change the data |
Section 3.2: How does the many-many relationship change the data |
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Section 4: comments on the internal architecture (relatively monolithic - |
Section 4: comments on the internal architecture (relatively monolithic - |
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is this an oxymoron?) seem out of place, and are also not well explained. |
is this an oxymoron?) seem out of place, and are also not well explained. |
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Hmm. Leave it out? |
Hmm. Leave it out? |
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Section 4.1: Nelson used the word intertwingled to describe a complex |
Section 4.1: Nelson used the word intertwingled to describe a complex |
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semantic interconnection. Please don't use it just to mean |
semantic interconnection. Please don't use it just to mean |
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'interconnected' or similar. |
'interconnected' or similar. |
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Section 4.2.1: RDF visualisation is something which is not uncommon in the |
Section 4.2.1: RDF visualisation is something which is not uncommon in the |
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semantic web. Please indicate how your approach differs from RDFViz |
semantic web. Please indicate how your approach differs from RDFViz |
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Do you know the package? |
Do you know the package? |
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Figure 4: Since this is the principle illustration of the concept of |
Figure 4: Since this is the principle illustration of the concept of |
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buoys, this diagram should be clearer. It currently is a mass of little |
buoys, this diagram should be clearer. It currently is a mass of little |
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Figure 5: Although I think I understand what the figure should be showing |
Figure 5: Although I think I understand what the figure should be showing |
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me, I can't see it in the screenshots themselves. |
me, I can't see it in the screenshots themselves. |
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Hmm... Could we make an animated gif, do you think? |
Hmm... Could we make an animated gif, do you think? |
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End of section 4.2: the example of a map with a buoy for every person who |
End of section 4.2: the example of a map with a buoy for every person who |
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lives there kind of invites a very probing question - can you handle 1 |
lives there kind of invites a very probing question - can you handle 1 |
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million buoys? Can the user? Is this a fundamental problem with items - |
million buoys? Can the user? Is this a fundamental problem with items - |
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just too many of them to handle? |
just too many of them to handle? |
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Milk fallacy. Hmm, maybe we should have kind of sidebars near the beginning, |
Milk fallacy. Hmm, maybe we should have kind of sidebars near the beginning, |
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discussing some of these... |
discussing some of these... |
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It's not useful showing 1 million people's homes, certainly. |
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Section 4.3: I'm not sure what this description of the user interface |
Section 4.3: I'm not sure what this description of the user interface |
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library provides the rest of trhe paper. |
library provides the rest of trhe paper. |
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Section 4.4: This seems to be potentially the most exciting part of the |
Section 4.4: This seems to be potentially the most exciting part of the |
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paper but I think that too little has been made of it. Develop a scenario |
paper but I think that too little has been made of it. Develop a scenario |
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of the use of FenPDF for understanding or organising academic literature |
of the use of FenPDF for understanding or organising academic literature |
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introduction). At the moment it is simply a too-brief demonstration of a |
introduction). At the moment it is simply a too-brief demonstration of a |
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novel user interface. |
novel user interface. |
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Ok, we should maybe show real snapshots of our structure? |
Ok, we should maybe show real snapshots of our structure? |
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Animated gif? |
Animated gif? |
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Section 5.1 - this review should continue beyond 1994! |
Section 5.1 - this review should continue beyond 1994! |
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Section 5.4 - I think you are missing a trick here. The Semantic Web is |
Section 5.4 - I think you are missing a trick here. The Semantic Web is |
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You say something... |
You say something... |
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\- Benja |