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# Line 122  If you run into this kind of situation, Line 122  If you run into this kind of situation,
122  create a new RDF node that has connections to both papers and gives  create a new RDF node that has connections to both papers and gives
123  the perspective under which they support / contradict each other.  the perspective under which they support / contradict each other.
124    
   
125      --      --
126    
127          In sum, the papers seems to have some interesting ideas floating around.          In sum, the papers seems to have some interesting ideas floating around.
# Line 275  Nope. Line 274  Nope.
274    
275  Yes.  Yes.
276    
277    So we need an own section or couple of paragraphs
278    explaining this and driving the point home.
279    
280    Can then go on and discuss whether document bodies
281    could be stored in external files.
282    
283      --      --
284    
285          Final 2 paragraphs of section 2 - you claim that paper isn't useful to          Final 2 paragraphs of section 2 - you claim that paper isn't useful to
# Line 285  Yes. Line 290  Yes.
290  Bogus. You need to be able to make interconnections at all, and just  Bogus. You need to be able to make interconnections at all, and just
291  as many as you need; more isn't better.  as many as you need; more isn't better.
292    
293    We probably need to give more detailed examples
294    of how this would help, tho.
295    
296    Also, *interconnections* sounds a bit like connections between
297    notes-- which is entirely wrong. Should explain this more.
298    
299      --      --
300    
301          Convince me that          Convince me that
302          you have thought this through rather than reciting Nelson's view. Have a          you have thought this through rather than reciting Nelson's view.
303    
304    Ok :-)
305    
306    I got nothing of this from Ted, so that should be easy ;-)
307    
308    Maybe if they understood this as "links between textual notes,"
309    that'd explain why they think it comes from Ted.
310    
311       --
312    
313            Have a
314          look at the network diagrams from the early Intermedia papers on the          look at the network diagrams from the early Intermedia papers on the
315          Victorian web.          Victorian web.
316    
   
317      Ok, not "the more interconnections" but the *right* amount.      Ok, not "the more interconnections" but the *right* amount.
318    
319      I.e. contrasting the spatial structures of      I.e. contrasting the spatial structures of
320      paper vs hyperbolic paper vs graph.      paper vs hyperbolic paper vs graph.
321    
322    What do you mean here?
323    
324        --
325    
326          Section 3.1: an illustration of the zzStructure might be useful,          Section 3.1: an illustration of the zzStructure might be useful,
327          especially if it could be compared with an RDF structure in 3.2          especially if it could be compared with an RDF structure in 3.2
328    
329    Yes.
330    
331        --
332    
333          Section 3.2: zzStructure is simpler to browse locally because it has          Section 3.2: zzStructure is simpler to browse locally because it has
334          higher-level (user-centred) semantics.          higher-level (user-centred) semantics.
335          Section 3.2: How does the many-many relationship change the data          Section 3.2: How does the many-many relationship change the data
# Line 309  as many as you need; more isn't better. Line 338  as many as you need; more isn't better.
338          Section 4: comments on the internal architecture (relatively monolithic -          Section 4: comments on the internal architecture (relatively monolithic -
339          is this an oxymoron?) seem out of place, and are also not well explained.          is this an oxymoron?) seem out of place, and are also not well explained.
340    
   
341      Hmm. Leave it out?      Hmm. Leave it out?
342    
343    Maybe.
344    
345        --
346    
347          Section 4.1: Nelson used the word intertwingled to describe a complex          Section 4.1: Nelson used the word intertwingled to describe a complex
348          semantic interconnection. Please don't use it just to mean          semantic interconnection. Please don't use it just to mean
349          'interconnected' or similar.          'interconnected' or similar.
350    
351    Argh, how could we miss that? I'd suggest "interwoven."
352    
353        --
354    
355          Section 4.2.1: RDF visualisation is something which is not uncommon in the          Section 4.2.1: RDF visualisation is something which is not uncommon in the
356          semantic web. Please indicate how your approach differs from RDFViz          semantic web. Please indicate how your approach differs from RDFViz
357    
   
358      Do you know the package?      Do you know the package?
359    
360    Nope. Google gives:
361    http://www.ilrt.bris.ac.uk/discovery/rdf-dev/rudolf/rdfviz/
362    
363    
364          Figure 4: Since this is the principle illustration of the concept of          Figure 4: Since this is the principle illustration of the concept of
365          buoys, this diagram should be clearer. It currently is a mass of little          buoys, this diagram should be clearer. It currently is a mass of little
# Line 332  as many as you need; more isn't better. Line 368  as many as you need; more isn't better.
368    
369      ;)      ;)
370    
371    Your job, I think...
372    
373          Figure 5: Although I think I understand what the figure should be showing          Figure 5: Although I think I understand what the figure should be showing
374          me, I can't see it in the screenshots themselves.          me, I can't see it in the screenshots themselves.
# Line 339  as many as you need; more isn't better. Line 376  as many as you need; more isn't better.
376    
377      Hmm... Could we make an animated gif, do you think?      Hmm... Could we make an animated gif, do you think?
378    
379    Could we use mng and mpg for browsers that don't do mng?
380    
381        --
382    
383          End of section 4.2: the example of a map with a buoy for every person who          End of section 4.2: the example of a map with a buoy for every person who
384          lives there kind of invites a very probing question - can you handle 1          lives there kind of invites a very probing question - can you handle 1
385          million buoys? Can the user? Is this a fundamental problem with items -          million buoys? Can the user? Is this a fundamental problem with items -
386          just too many of them to handle?          just too many of them to handle?
387    
   
388      Milk fallacy. Hmm, maybe we should have kind of sidebars near the beginning,      Milk fallacy. Hmm, maybe we should have kind of sidebars near the beginning,
389      discussing some of these...      discussing some of these...
390    
391    It's not useful showing 1 million people's homes, certainly.
392    There would be no point in a user requesting this view.
393    
394          Section 4.3: I'm not sure what this description of the user interface          Section 4.3: I'm not sure what this description of the user interface
395          library provides the rest of trhe paper.          library provides the rest of trhe paper.
396    
397    What should we do about this? Leave it out? Explain better?
398    
399          Section 4.4: This seems to be potentially the most exciting part of the          Section 4.4: This seems to be potentially the most exciting part of the
400          paper but I think that too little has been made of it. Develop a scenario          paper but I think that too little has been made of it. Develop a scenario
401          of the use of FenPDF for understanding or organising academic literature          of the use of FenPDF for understanding or organising academic literature
# Line 359  as many as you need; more isn't better. Line 403  as many as you need; more isn't better.
403          introduction). At the moment it is simply a too-brief demonstration of a          introduction). At the moment it is simply a too-brief demonstration of a
404          novel user interface.          novel user interface.
405    
   
406      Ok, we should maybe show real snapshots of our structure?      Ok, we should maybe show real snapshots of our structure?
407      Animated gif?      Animated gif?
408    
409    mng/mpg?
410    
411        --
412    
413          Section 5.1 - this review should continue beyond 1994!          Section 5.1 - this review should continue beyond 1994!
414          Section 5.4 - I think you are missing a trick here. The Semantic Web is          Section 5.4 - I think you are missing a trick here. The Semantic Web is
# Line 374  as many as you need; more isn't better. Line 420  as many as you need; more isn't better.
420    
421      You say something...      You say something...
422    
423      Tuomas  Well, let's just give some integration uses there. Sounds good to me.
   
424    
425    \- Benja

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