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revision 1.6 by tjl, Sat Nov 8 18:02:58 2003 UTC revision 1.7 by benja, Sat Nov 8 18:04:35 2003 UTC
# Line 11  Small matters Line 11  Small matters
11  - XXX The references you give are  - XXX The references you give are
12    applicable, but aren't sufficient-- what do we do?    applicable, but aren't sufficient-- what do we do?
13  - Don't say "intertwingled"  - Don't say "intertwingled"
14    - Add illustration of zzstructure, comparing with RDF structure
15      in 3.2
16    - Leave "relatively monolithic" out?
17    - Look at & discuss RDFviz (give a somewhat better overview
18      of RDF visualization...)
19    - Animations of buoys &c
20    - Leave libvob section out??
21    - Continue review in 4.1 beyond 1994
22    
23  Examples  Examples
24  ========  ========
# Line 27  Changes in "tone" Line 34  Changes in "tone"
34  (Go through whole paper and look for instances:)  (Go through whole paper and look for instances:)
35    
36  - Make it sound less like Ted speaking (according to reviewer)...  - Make it sound less like Ted speaking (according to reviewer)...
37    
38      - Contrast what we propose with what Ted says...
39    
40  - Say where we conject, give reasons for why we believe  - Say where we conject, give reasons for why we believe
41    our claims    our claims
42    
# Line 49  Discussion that needs to be added Line 59  Discussion that needs to be added
59    
60    - XXX maybe give an 'everyday' example scenario?    - XXX maybe give an 'everyday' example scenario?
61    - refer to this from abstract? (We discuss...)    - refer to this from abstract? (We discuss...)
62      - It's not about "more" interconnections, it's about
63        having items and their interconnections *at all*
64      - Move discussion about paper notes here?
65    
66  - Relationship between items and documents:  - Relationship between items and documents:
67    

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